Creative Writing

I finished up the beginning to the story and have submitted it. I feel reasonably well about it, although there are still some parts that trouble me, but hopefully I'll get some advice on it tomorrow. There is one important element I've maintained throughout the beginning; the mystery behind the main character. I want to keep him as much of a mystery as possible. I've avoided using his name at all, which I hope will help me accomplish the mysterious element. The whole idea is he has a really bad past, and it comes back. I've no idea how I'm gonna finish it but at least I finished part of it.