Creative Writing

I've got a good beginning of story, but there is an aspect that seems to be missing. The whole story flows good at some points, and at others there seems to be slight loggerheads. I feel like I've been able to maintain a sense of mystery in relation to the identity of the main character's past, which I feel is an important aspect of this particular story, and I'll probably be able to bring it in for the meeting Thursday. Hopefully then I'll be able to get more feedback on it and enhance it.