Last week I missed the meeting due to Group 4 presentations, and this week one of the group members brought in the first chapter of a book they were writing and I myself though it was a interesting idea, and had potential, but I felt it ran too fast, and the grammar could have been improved.
Also, the story I'm working on finally has an official beginning, and I have typed the first page, as I had brainstormed it, with a few minor changes. This way I feel it brings out the suspense better, and i eliminated a few of the ideas that I felt was flimsier, and hope to be able to present the first chapeter of the story by the week after the next.
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